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Paradise Lost

Paradise lost Youthful memories is all that I have to cherish, Agony of losing a dear one how can anyone embellish? There were times my thoughts were so positive, Your love my life, I was always imperative, Now living in past, there's hardly any charm, Once so bubbly, I now remain calm, Redness of my cheeks is on a fade, Glowing thoughts, now a weary jade, Your sweet words are my prized possession, Diary that once giggled, is a teary succession, Still I hold it dear, very close to my heart, Although enough to tear my soul apart, Orangery of my twilights is covered with frost, Without your passion, I am in a paradise lost ! Written on 21/7/14 Contest- Painting in the orangery Sponsor- Isaiah Zerbst

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Date: 7/21/2014 5:25:00 PM
Wow! Upma.....you sure delved into that picture with a unique take. a7rating for you. You made good use of that book, too. // paul
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 7/22/2014 4:58:00 AM
Oh that's so great of you Paul! adorable words from you n high rating,, u r so kind to me ,, thanks a lot!
Date: 7/21/2014 8:33:00 AM
A great write my friend! I just sent you a pm about this one. Best of luck in the contest!!!
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Date: 7/21/2014 9:17:00 AM
Thnx a lot for ur valuable comments my dear friend! Soup mail !
Date: 7/21/2014 3:36:00 AM
Wonderful interpretation of the picture. Good luck in the contest. Hugs jan x
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 7/21/2014 4:14:00 AM
Thnx for ur lovely visit n wishes Jan!

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