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Paradise

Perhaps in this life not Attainable although perpetually sought, Radiating joy and constant peace, A place where troubles cease, Delightful absence of hatred and fear; Idyllic atmosphere Sequestering the soul, Eternally with God and whole. COPYRIGHT, December 20, 2015 Faye Lanham Gibson

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Date: 1/14/2016 11:04:00 AM
#7 truly underrates this magnificent piece.. Absolutely brilliant
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Date: 12/28/2015 10:17:00 PM
nice win
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Date: 12/28/2015 4:20:00 AM
Faye, Congratulations on your win. LINDA
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Date: 12/30/2015 3:50:00 PM
Faye...Happy New Year ~LINDA~
Date: 12/28/2015 2:00:00 AM
Great take on theme and a wonderful acrostic Faye.. congrats on big win!
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Date: 12/27/2015 7:37:00 PM
Wonderful thoughts about the meaning of paradise, Faye. Congratulations on your nice win. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 12/27/2015 6:11:00 PM
ABSOLUTE TRUTH IN THE TELLING MY FRIEND! A7 Congratulations on your great win!!
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Date: 12/27/2015 3:11:00 PM
big congrats for your win. You said a mouthful in these few short lines.
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Date: 12/27/2015 8:16:00 AM
Congratulations on your win! Very nice acrostic you describe.
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Date: 12/27/2015 3:12:00 AM
Hi Faye...I love this lovely description of paradise delivered with simple yet effective words...a real utopia. ~ Congratulations on a merited win. ~ Regards // paul
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Date: 12/27/2015 1:10:00 AM
This is truly a paradise! Such a lovely piece with a smooth flow and amazing rhyming (which I find difficult to do with Acrostics). Congratulations, dear Faye, on a wonderful win! Pandita
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Date: 12/26/2015 11:59:00 PM
Congrats on your placement, very nice!
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Date: 12/25/2015 5:00:00 PM
Faye, I want to Wish you a Merry Christmas and Happy New Year May all your days shine and dreams come true. :) Every day should be a day with family and friends. I appreciate everyone. Sorry to all those I have taken for granted. SHAME ON ME. I promise, 2016 will be a new me. Merry Christmas!!! May the true meaning of the holiday season fill your heart and home. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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Date: 12/25/2015 12:55:00 AM
Inspiring piece Faye. I always gravitate toward the positive. Mele Kalikimaka my frienf. Blessings and Aloha, Connie
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