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Paradise lives inside a peaceful state of mind; Abundantly enjoyed within a loving heart. Reality of beauty seen in all you find; All life's surroundings likened to a work of art. Divined by harmony, you live your every day Inside a dream of life that spirit makes come true, So ordinary happenings glow in that ray, Expressing joys of paradise on earth for you. December 21, 2015 ~3rd Place~ Contest: Paradise Acrostic Sponsor: John Hamilton Judged: 12/27/2015 Form within Acrostic: Rhymed Iambic Hexamenter - 12 syllables and 6 feet per line

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Date: 12/28/2015 10:17:00 PM
Sandra, a very nice win. SKAT
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Date: 12/28/2015 4:19:00 AM
Sandra, Congratulations on your win. LINDA
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Date: 12/28/2015 2:42:00 AM
A marvellous paradise to live in! Congrats on your placement, Sandra!
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Sandra Haight
Date: 12/29/2015 6:02:00 PM
Hi Balveen, thank you once again for your continued visits and support. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 12/28/2015 1:57:00 AM
Another splendid win to ur credit dear Sandra.. great poetry.. big congrats!
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Sandra Haight
Date: 12/29/2015 6:02:00 PM
Thank you, Dr. Upma. I appreciate your visit and supportive comments so much. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 12/27/2015 6:06:00 PM
I love the philosophy so evident in your superb poem my friend. Congratulations of a great win!! A7
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Sandra Haight
Date: 12/27/2015 8:04:00 PM
Hi Robert, thank you so much for your uplifting comment and support. I appreciate it so much. Sandra
Date: 12/27/2015 3:09:00 PM
Congrats, Sandra. The message in your poem was outstanding.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 12/27/2015 4:12:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 12/27/2015 11:19:00 AM
Sandra, yet one more beautiful win you have today!! Congrats.. *smiles*
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Sandra Haight
Date: 12/27/2015 4:12:00 PM
Hi Laura, thank you once again for your continued support! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 12/27/2015 10:47:00 AM
Sandra congratulations on your win.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 12/27/2015 4:13:00 PM
Thanks so much, Michael. I appreciate your visit and congratulations. Sandra
Date: 12/27/2015 10:05:00 AM
Beautiful write Sandra...well penned...Congrats on your win
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Sandra Haight
Date: 12/27/2015 4:13:00 PM
Thank you so much, Michael, for your positive comment and congrats. Sandra
Date: 12/27/2015 8:03:00 AM
Congratulations on your 3rd place win. I really like this. Your Paradise is one obtained with appreciation. I like thought-provoking acrostics.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 12/27/2015 4:14:00 PM
Hi Susan, I appreciate your nice comment and congrats! Thank you! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 12/27/2015 2:59:00 AM
A most lovely paradise where love and peace offer unlimited joy. Congratulations on this much deserved win, Sandra! ~ Regards // paul
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Sandra Haight
Date: 12/27/2015 4:16:00 PM
Hi Paul, so nice of you to stop by with your positive comment and congrats! Thank you so much. Sandra
Date: 12/27/2015 1:05:00 AM
Congratulations, my dear Sandra, on your wonderful win! This is such a beautiful, inspirational piece! Pandita
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Sandra Haight
Date: 12/27/2015 4:16:00 PM
Thank you, Pandita. I appreciate your lovely comment and congratulations so much. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 12/26/2015 11:49:00 PM
Congratulations Sandra on a wonderful poem, you really never disappoint, what a talent!36/40 Thanks for your great participation.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 12/27/2015 4:17:00 PM
John, it was a pleasure to participate in your contest with such an inspiring theme to write about. Thank you for my nice placement! Sandra
Date: 12/22/2015 12:45:00 AM
Though they differ, we can all make our own Paradise of sorts, Sandra. Lovely Acrostic, I'm sure that it will do well. Happy Christmas! Viv x
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Sandra Haight
Date: 12/26/2015 8:30:00 PM
Thank you, Viv, for your visit and uplifting comment. I hope your Christmas Day was blessed and wonderful. Sandra
Date: 12/21/2015 2:07:00 PM
Love how you see Paradise, Sandra! that is truly paradise!!
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Sandra Haight
Date: 12/21/2015 8:04:00 PM
Hi Andrea, thank you for the nice comment. Yes, we make our own paradise! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 12/21/2015 1:10:00 PM
A utopia, no less! I really like the dream-like vibe here.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 12/21/2015 8:05:00 PM
Hi Michael, so nice of your to stop by to read my poem and leave your positive comment. Much appreciated! Sandra

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