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Paradise for me is a beautiful Utopia heavenly, And opening the gate, I would stand breathlessly. Rapture, happiness, bliss, oh the contentment, And the air would be full of birds and flower scent. Deep in my soul, I have imagined this heaven, In this sweet Nirvana above, all is forgiven. So listen, beyond the clouds for an angel singing, Every beautiful thing I will sing, is here dwelling. ____________________________ December 21, 2015 Acrostic/Rhyme For the contest, Paradise Acrostic, sponsor John Hamilton Second Place

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Dalia Shahein

Date: 12/29/2015 6:20:00 AM

Congrats on ur wining with this mesmerizing poem...hugs / / :)

Constance La France
Date: 12/29/2015 10:24:00 AM

Dalia, thanks for the mesmerizing and for the congrats ~

Skat A

Date: 12/28/2015 10:15:00 PM

Broken, a very nice win. SKAT

Constance La France
Date: 12/29/2015 10:25:00 AM

Skat, thanks for the congrats

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/28/2015 4:18:00 AM

Broken,, Congratulations on your win. LINDA

Constance La France
Date: 12/28/2015 7:48:00 AM

Linda, thanks for the visit and the congratulations ~

Balveen Cheema

Date: 12/28/2015 2:32:00 AM

Congrats Constance on your angelic flight to a beautiful utopia where everything is forgiven!

Constance La France
Date: 12/28/2015 7:49:00 AM

Balveen, oh I loved that line also, thanks for the congrats !

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 12/28/2015 1:55:00 AM

Great take on theme and a wonderful acrostic Broken.. congrats on big win!

Constance La France
Date: 12/28/2015 7:50:00 AM

Upma, thanks for the compliment, the wonderful and the congrats ~

Robert Lindley

Date: 12/27/2015 6:01:00 PM

Broken Wings, I would love to find that all our future paradises were waiting as is the one you described! A7 Congrats on your fine win!!

Constance La France
Date: 12/27/2015 6:08:00 PM

Robert, thanks for visiting with that nice comment, and for the congrats and the 7 !

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/27/2015 3:07:00 PM

glad to finally see this one of yours, Constance. yes, this is paradise!! Congrats to you.

Constance La France
Date: 12/27/2015 6:09:00 PM

Andrea, thanks so much for the congrats, appreciate ~

Lu Loo

Date: 12/27/2015 11:17:00 AM

Congrats on your win Broken Wings..very beautiful write...-luloo *hugs*

Constance La France
Date: 12/27/2015 6:10:00 PM

Laura, thanks for the congrats, the beautiful and the hugs ~

Michael Tor

Date: 12/27/2015 10:44:00 AM

Congratulations Constance on your Paradise win!

Constance La France
Date: 12/27/2015 6:10:00 PM

Michael, thank you so much for the congratulations ~

Sandra Haight

Date: 12/27/2015 8:59:00 AM

Here is my 7!

Sandra Haight

Date: 12/27/2015 8:58:00 AM

Such a beautiful poem that reflects the amazing paradise of heaven, Broken Wings. Congratulations on your wonderful win. 7, Hugs, Sandra

Constance La France
Date: 12/27/2015 6:12:00 PM

Sandra, thanks for the beautiful and the amazing, the congratulations of the 7 ~

Susan Gentry

Date: 12/27/2015 7:51:00 AM

Congratulations on your 2nd place win with such an extremely beautiful acrostic.

Constance La France
Date: 12/27/2015 6:13:00 PM

Susan, thanks for the congratulations and the beautiful ~

Paul Callus

Date: 12/27/2015 2:50:00 AM

Just beautiful!!! You inspire Constance....I look forward to partake of an awesome paradise such as this one! ~ Congratulations on a merited high-flying win. ~ Warm regards // paul

Constance La France
Date: 12/27/2015 6:14:00 PM

Paul, oh thanks for that wonderful comment, compliment and congratulations, so appreciated ~

John Hamilton

Date: 12/26/2015 11:41:00 PM

Congratulations on a beautiful poem just excellent 37/40. Unbelievable talent you have.

Constance La France
Date: 12/27/2015 6:16:00 PM

John, thank you so much for my wonderful placement in your contest, I am very honored

Robert Lindley

Date: 12/23/2015 10:14:00 AM

My friend, you have penned a great Acrostic poem. Smooth, clear , rhyme and message is superb..

Constance La France
Date: 12/23/2015 11:52:00 AM

Robert, thanks for visiting, with that lovely comment, I do love the word superb ~

Keith Bickerstaffe

Date: 12/21/2015 12:30:00 PM

cool rhyminig in your final four lines... intended or not it wraps the verse up nicely. Beautiful lyrics and imagery, and there is a flow even though you had to contend with the ACROSTIC restriction. BRAVO BW! Best wishes, Keith

Constance La France
Date: 12/21/2015 12:35:00 PM

Keith, thanks for the supportive comment, appreciate