Paradise

Her face glows in a divine halo, while her thoughts get lost in letters; yes, letters!; between the letters, sentences and words; she sees God in the form of beautiful words for the soul; words that are too hard to find....

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/30/2014 8:04:00 AM

Sure, thing!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/29/2014 12:14:00 PM

Hi Teddy, :) Congratulations, on your winning poem... Love Linda

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 7/30/2014 2:05:00 AM

Thanks Linda! <3 ^_^

Ziad Gadou

Date: 7/24/2014 9:09:00 PM

great write!

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 7/25/2014 8:21:00 AM

Thank you Ziad. Hope we can work on dark-themed poems with you in the future! :-)

Jan Allison

Date: 7/23/2014 12:41:00 PM

a few short words beautifully crafted - congratulations on your great win. hugs jan xxx

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 7/24/2014 12:34:00 AM

Thank you very much Jan! ^_^

Paul Callus

Date: 7/23/2014 9:46:00 AM

You too, like Faye, were inspired by the divine; short but meaningful poem. Congratulations, Teddy! // paul

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 7/23/2014 10:17:00 AM

Thank you very much Paul. I realized that the best poems come from meditation and silence, where the invisible words slowly become visible. Regards, Teddy.