Paradise

he touches her face looking into her green eyes seeing fear within smiles and holding her cold hand he leads her to Paradise

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Wayland Bunch

Date: 8/25/2013 9:24:00 PM

I tried a different approach and came upon this jewel. Nice short poem with few words, but a lot of power.

Seren Roberts
Date: 8/26/2013 9:41:00 AM

How did you miss this one?..Seren

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 2/6/2013 10:55:00 AM

wowe what a crime and all those hits for so few comments that is bad form on those reading , this is superb sweetie xx

Seren Roberts
Date: 2/6/2013 5:36:00 PM

makes me wonder Mandy 959 read it and about 4 comments before yours.

David Williams

Date: 1/16/2013 12:07:00 PM

Seren now I love this, very romantic indeed...David

Seren Roberts
Date: 1/16/2013 12:49:00 PM

Thanks David

Rollo West

Date: 1/5/2013 10:26:00 PM

hi Seren, outstanding, my kind of Tanka, brilliant. Rollo

Seren Roberts
Date: 1/5/2013 10:36:00 PM

Awwww romantic Rollo I knew I could rely on you to comment......Seren

Russell Sivey

Date: 1/5/2013 8:24:00 PM

This is definitely an extremely beautiful write, very beautiful my friend! I truly loved reading this incredible and amazing poem this evening! What a powerful and harmonious piece, Great Work!!

Seren Roberts
Date: 1/5/2013 9:21:00 PM

Thank you Russell......Seren