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Paradigmatic

The hawk flies alone Wings beat in the breast of skies All goals intertwines

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 2/6/2010 4:55:00 PM
Much for the reader to ponder about for just three lines. Good use of imagery. I like the perspective in the last line. Keep on writing! Karen
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Date: 2/3/2010 6:14:00 PM
L'nass this is an interesting Haiku. A hawk does fly alone. He's a hunter and he hunts best solitary! Great write, my friend! Have you been here on the soup lately? Hope all is well. Peace, Audrey
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