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late November air, crisp pale with the steamy breath of borderless joy for children who sit curbside bundled in the bulk of layers softening cold children (mitten heavy) waiting waiting for a parade of mother goose, hand-stand clowns fairy tale floats and glitter princesses glassy as if stars shivered into pieces children, free of complications their rosy palettes of cheeky faces their laughter scribbled like graffiti on walls unknowing of the bloody passion that shakes the walls of peace children, resistant to the frost, shift with each marching band in praise of winter's pull like pumped fists in the air halting (briefly) endless clips of time for children with vantage points to catch the reindeer tow of Santa with festive thoughts that scurry like mice in a maze passing parade holiday hardy a glitzy show that snaps bare trees to attention like watchers to mimic the sassy steps of elves rotating in a world crying seeking magic pitter-patter propelled like children's kite-high wishing

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Date: 9/28/2023 4:13:00 AM
Wow, Brian! You've beautifully captured the sights, sounds, and feelings of waiting for and watching a holiday parade. The structure is unusual but outstanding and not distracting....guides the reader's eyes well. I liked so many likes...but 'children resistant to frost' is accurate. Just a lovely poem and a fave. Have a pleasant day.
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 9/28/2023 6:11:00 AM
Greetings Sara, Thank you for your stop by + supportive appraisal. Our Santa Claus Parade provided the nudge needed for the write. With sincere good wishes. Be well. Brian
Date: 7/31/2023 11:57:00 AM
- I have never experienced such a parade ... (only on TV) ... sounds wonderful both for children and adults - Congratulations on your win in the contest :) -
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 7/31/2023 2:32:00 PM
Hi Anne-Lise, our Santa Parade is a big draw for children in late November. Department store windows are all decked out. The children sparkle. Thank you for your stop by + congratulations. Be well. Brian
Date: 7/31/2023 10:23:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A fun write. I enjoyed it. Have a great day.............
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 7/31/2023 2:29:00 PM
Thanks very much Paula. We have a huge Santa Claus Parade here in Toronto. I would take my niece to the parade when she was little. So the muse was handy. With appreciation, Brian

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