Papillon

Fragile wings calling Living life in the moment Beauty unaware

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Date: 5/10/2010 7:07:00 PM

So much captured in just three lines. Nice use of imagery for a creative view. Enjoyed it. Thank you for your kind comment on my poem. Keep on writing! Karen

Iolanda Scripca

Date: 5/8/2010 7:45:00 PM

Too bad this winged beauty is ephemeral... Thanks for your comment, dear Barbara :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/7/2010 8:21:00 AM

PS Have you thought of your pantoum yet?

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/7/2010 8:20:00 AM

Beautiful, Barbara!

Brian Strand

Date: 5/6/2010 8:14:00 AM

We can learn mutch from nature BG if we just watch and observe.Rgds Brian

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 5/5/2010 6:44:00 PM

It's a fine senryu

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/5/2010 4:10:00 PM

Lovely Haiku BG and a great title to match.. if for a contest .. good luck.. if not.. good reading tonight for the "Sweetheart"