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Paper Thin

Tearing up, the revised versions. Wall was rising. Invisible, like the unconceived terror. Half-eaten space, the man wants to hide the holiness. The final leap, for the hips, the lips for the dive. The bloodied paperweight, which smasthed the skull of a bald deity. The arguments, that kill the path, a gift of sky. Satish Verma

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Date: 2/14/2014 11:10:00 AM
An interesting write. One correction is needed: replace "unconceived" (not a word) with "inconceivable".
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