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Paper Plane

Paper airplane flies Landing in fortunate place Summer winds of change

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Skat A

Date: 5/7/2016 1:02:00 PM

edwin, this is an awesome poem, thank you for sharing. *SKAT*

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 9/20/2014 12:58:00 PM

Hi Edwin, I love this wonderful haiku! Excellent write! I extend a warm welcome to PoetrySoup and wish you happy writings. Pandita

John Posey

Date: 9/18/2014 1:02:00 PM

It takes talent to hold together a haiku.... You have broken the code, my friend.... welcome to PSoup..... Regards..... Jake

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/18/2014 9:25:00 AM

Edwin, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry:) Here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/18/2014 3:52:00 AM

Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,Edwin - I choose your first great written haiku ! - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- Be kind and keep PoetrySoup as a haven -(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you for posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/18/2014 1:45:00 AM

Pleasing scene created, Edwin