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Confetti The Wind

Armed with little more than hope, truth becomes your trusted shield. For you believe in yourself; and the confidence you wield. The City is aglitter, yet hunger's all too real. And those flashing neon lights detract from how scared you feel. You see, open bigotry redefining right and wrong. And an unjust system where the weak empower the strong. Wishes confetti the wind as paper dreams fly away. And if that doesn't make you cry, it is your soul you betray. Ravaged by a wicked world, innocence is quick to die. Reality is ugly, and Santa Claus is a lie.

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Date: 3/14/2018 2:21:00 PM
Ouch - Strong messaging. "Confronting a wicked world innocence is first to die. For reality’s ugly and Santa-Claus is a lie." Well done, Emile.
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Date: 3/14/2018 3:41:00 PM
Thanks Line, your visits are always welcomed and appreciated my friend, Emile.
Date: 4/20/2015 7:14:00 PM
very enjoyable read!
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Date: 4/20/2015 7:41:00 PM
Thanks Lizzy, I appreciate your visit. Emile.
Date: 4/18/2015 2:38:00 PM
Raw and beautiful, it hits home with me!
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Date: 4/18/2015 5:30:00 PM
Thanks Sarah, I appreciate your support. Emile.
Date: 4/18/2015 11:10:00 AM
Bitterness is felt in Santa-Claws, "claws" having a nearly closed lips sound. A seven for this, Emile.
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Date: 4/18/2015 12:42:00 PM
Thanks Julia, your support is appreciated. Emile.
Date: 4/17/2015 4:20:00 PM
An emotional write with sad meanings. Thank you for your comment. Much appreciated. love phyl
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Date: 4/18/2015 8:11:00 AM
Thanks Phyllis, your visits are always welcomed and appreciated. Emile.
Date: 4/17/2015 3:28:00 AM
- A sad poem but from the heart and soul - Great written, Emile - I wish you a wonderful day and a relaxed weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 4/17/2015 8:09:00 AM
Thanks Anne Lise, your continued support is appreciated. Emile.
Date: 4/16/2015 10:39:00 PM
Tap them keys dear poet, and make us believe ! Great write ! Have a wonderful week.....much love, james
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Date: 4/17/2015 8:10:00 AM
Thanks James, your continued support is appreciated. Emile.
Date: 4/16/2015 3:09:00 PM
Paper dreams are better than harsh realities. Sometimes, it is easier to live with a lie than the bitter truth... You encourage us to hold onto our dreams and never let go. A very emotive piece, Emile!
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Date: 4/17/2015 8:11:00 AM
Thanks Kelly, your continued support is appreciated. Emile.
Date: 4/16/2015 10:31:00 AM
Although not optimistic this poem tries to describe truth in a very efective way. I appreciate such a poetry, my compliments
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Date: 4/16/2015 12:06:00 PM
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Date: 4/16/2015 12:06:00 PM
Thanks Mario, I appreciate your support. Emile.

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