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Paper Airplains To You

Thoughts spill on paper wings.... Comes to life in a poetic ring... A paper airplane written just for you... Words from a heart that fell in two.. They fly across your distant sky... Reaching eyes while they whisper by... A paper airplane that has to fly... Sprinkled with hugs and care for a love gone by...

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Yanny Widjanarko

Date: 11/18/2012 5:42:00 PM

I really got the picture of this paper airplane, this is so smooth like was flying upon the skies and passing through the marshmallow clouds, romantic but slightly gives some yearning point. Simple couplet with the huge and deep impression - Hug, Yanny

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 8/22/2012 7:19:00 PM

What a sweet way to send yoour message, romantic and creative to captivate the girl of your dreams!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/22/2012 6:21:00 PM

Michael, your words are like magic. very adorable on this poem. A flight of words into the heart..xox~pd

Sukmawati Komala

Date: 8/22/2012 8:37:00 AM

I lov your write ...Thanks Michael :) SK

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 8/21/2012 9:24:00 PM

oh so tender UI can feel the emotion so clearly Michael luv..simply put but powerfully stated.. past loves have a way of hanging on like your paper airplanes.. remember making them aws a child? JG does.. xoxo

Joann Grisetti

Date: 8/20/2012 1:14:00 PM

Glad to see you here today. Nice poetic symbolism.

Harry Horsman

Date: 8/20/2012 10:16:00 AM

sincerity across the miles i read here, Michael. awesome message.

Cory Long

Date: 8/19/2012 8:44:00 AM

No TPS took it down... Thanks for letting me tell my story TPS. Glad to know that 3 days was enough time to let others speak up..

David Williams

Date: 8/19/2012 7:02:00 AM

did you remove your blog?

Kash Poet

Date: 8/19/2012 6:51:00 AM

Beautiful roamantic poem here Michael.Enjoyed the read.

David Williams

Date: 8/19/2012 5:18:00 AM

Michael excellent write,...Dave

Cory Long

Date: 8/18/2012 11:09:00 PM

this was really well penned nice job! cory

Joy Wellington

Date: 8/18/2012 8:20:00 PM

MJ, this is a lovely play of words with such sweet connotations. Thanks for reading my "Bright Hungry Belly" which is a work based upon facts...One love. Joy Wells

Delysia Hendricks

Date: 8/18/2012 7:27:00 PM

Awww, Michael. I sure hope this is a work of fiction. If not, keep sending those thoughts on paper wings. Chin up. :)

Russell Sivey

Date: 8/18/2012 6:24:00 PM

This is a wondrous poem my friend! I really enjoyed your creativity within this special write! What a tremendous piece, Great Work!!