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Pang

Pang….no more!! Pang….suddenly, shocks me! This unfathomable message I didn't expect would touch me An emotional distress..a change Devastatingly censures me With horrifying like ‘an abominable substance In my heart and soul, naked truth it insinuates Have to act, counteract and dislike the note like committing suicide! Pang….this plea must please Might dealt me to my knees Despairing me though to the bone I know i’m not remiss but acknowledge Succombs me seriously extend some Allayed fears and nuisances That i must know without expect a mundane Seemed doom this waterloo of napoleon bonaparte’s. Pang….would pity humbled me I resolve to finally try absolve Up to this dying moment i perceive hope Nonetheless, more time to intercede This hay must not go into waste As my creator on my seemingly side Eventually, compose myself counting on me For the last time. Await’s a chance to an oozing love! Pang….these horrors i didn't know where it came Thus, it beacons me and drowns me Nauseating my whole being now fragile My military acumen enough yet fight the nemesis Much ready to stand parry with confidence Though my dwindling and disarrayed star still would sense And the battle has just begun only to win the war sometime At the right time. No more pangs to bear but a sweet revenge. By: william s. Labtis

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 4/5/2015 4:02:00 PM
WILLIAM, Dropped by to say hi and congratulate you on having your poem selected by Soup's Administration. This is a wonderful poem to have featured on the homepage. Have yourself a Happy Easter ~Always & Forever~ LINDA
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