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Pandemonium

Packed like sardines in a subway train a scream and then the samurai sword swings no escape it's a scene from some sort of sick film death came from suburbia today every single soul prayed he didn't know their name mad man or martyr if it's you slain its all the same only the sound of screeching breaks, drowns out the screams no god, he slipped away to see who had died of starvation today in the distance sirens sound as salvation makes its way under strip lights peoples souls have slipped away make the voices speaking to me go silent now , I'm spent, done. Pandemonium comp entry 05/08/2016

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Date: 8/9/2016 10:58:00 AM
Hi Stephen, the content in this write is excellent. I hope it does well for you in the contest. An acrostic whose power and depth draw you intp its heart. Bravo! my friend. This is a seven, most definitely....Mike.
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Stephen Pennell
Date: 8/9/2016 11:22:00 AM
it was an na but I liked it :-) thank you
Date: 8/5/2016 5:04:00 PM
Well written great poem xxxx
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Stephen Pennell
Date: 8/6/2016 3:48:00 AM
many thanks hope the judge agrees :-)
Date: 8/5/2016 1:27:00 PM
powerful images here, stephen, and the alliteration was well placed!...huggs
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Stephen Pennell
Date: 8/5/2016 3:43:00 PM
many thanks hope it gets a place thank you

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