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Panic, crying and screaming - sheer chaos ensues Airport is on automatic security shut down Nobody knew bombs were going to be detonated Dead and injured litter the check in area Everybody else runs for their life Many are separated from their families Only hoping and praying their loved ones are safe No one knows where or when terrorists will strike I cannot comprehend why these atrocities happen Ugly scenes we are seeing all too frequently across the world Maybe one day in the future we have peace Pandemonium Contest Sponsored by John Hamilton 08~02~16

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Wendy Rycroft

Date: 8/10/2016 8:16:00 AM

Congrats well written xxxx x

Jan Allison
Date: 8/10/2016 12:24:00 PM

Many thanks Wendy:-) hugs Jan xx

Winged Warrior

Date: 8/7/2016 8:46:00 PM

Congrats!!! Jan...what else is new lol...god bless...^WW^

Jan Allison
Date: 8/10/2016 12:24:00 PM

Many thanks ^WW^:-) hugs Jan xx

Lu Loo

Date: 8/7/2016 6:58:00 PM

Jan, I love this. It's so honest and flows really well. Congrats on your placement lady :)-luloo

Jan Allison
Date: 8/10/2016 12:24:00 PM

Thanks LuLoo its a scary world we live in:-( hugs Jan xx

Sandra Haight

Date: 8/7/2016 6:49:00 PM

Jan, congratulations on your fine placement in the 'pandemonium' Acrostic contest. What horrible circumstances we have to fear these days...sad. Hugs, Sandra

Jan Allison
Date: 8/7/2016 6:54:00 PM

Thanks Sandra its a scary world we live in:-( hugs jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/7/2016 6:23:00 PM

Congrats, Jan. This one made my day after losing Caves!

Jan Allison
Date: 8/7/2016 6:55:00 PM

Way to go my friend - just the boost you needed today:-) hugs jan xx

Anisha Dutta

Date: 8/4/2016 7:37:00 PM

Very Good Write. Sure to win .

Jan Allison
Date: 8/7/2016 6:55:00 PM

Thanks Anisha:-) hugs jan xx

Stephen Pennell

Date: 8/4/2016 7:01:00 AM

good theme to pick and a message sent to boot good luck in the comp

Jan Allison
Date: 8/4/2016 7:13:00 AM

Thanks Stephen it was quite a difficult poem to write:-( hugs Jan xx

Wendy Rycroft

Date: 8/4/2016 4:55:00 AM

This is a powerful poem x so sad but true your poem is fantastic x

Jan Allison
Date: 8/4/2016 7:13:00 AM

Thanks Wendy:-( hugs Jan xx

Tim Smith

Date: 8/3/2016 11:14:00 AM

It is one of those things in this world I can't comprehend either...excellent acrostic Jan

Jan Allison
Date: 8/3/2016 11:28:00 AM

Thanks Tim and sadly there is no answer on how to stop it happening:-) hugs Jan xx

Hillard Sarver

Date: 8/3/2016 7:40:00 AM

This is a great poem about the blackness that some twisted humans do. The sad thing is often terrorists, do this by the name of their religion. There can never be a personal belief system that is "the truth" and condones this behavior. It is a dark corruption and does not belong in the collective consciousness of mankind. Well done.

Jan Allison
Date: 8/3/2016 7:50:00 AM

It's so heartbreaking to see these atrocities on the news Hillard and as you say these despicable acts are done in the name of religion:-( hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/3/2016 6:05:00 AM

Well done, jan. I see you took the challenge and you did exactly what he asked!! i am not seeing many poems that give suggestions for changing the situation though. Mine sure doesn't. Who can know how to change this evil??

Jan Allison
Date: 8/3/2016 7:00:00 AM

There isn't an answer to how to stop it Andrea and sadly it seems to be happening more and more frequently:-( hugs jan xx

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 8/3/2016 5:32:00 AM

It is horrible all he things that are going on in the world. You have described a chilling reality. Thanks for the visit and comment on my poem. Hugs Rick.

Jan Allison
Date: 8/3/2016 6:59:00 AM

I wasn't sure what to write on the theme Richard but sadly the news seems to be full of these atrocities so I went on this sad theme:-( thanks for the mail:-):-) hugs Jan xx