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Pandemonium

Passionate for wrong causes Angst against one and masses Not enough compassion in humans Death sprawled before innocent eyes Ears inundated with deafening cries Malls, clubs, beaches all are unsafe Ominous fear looms large in each face Nation, race, religion reign supreme Ignored lies the bond of humanity Under a sun of love and tolerance My Lord, let us all rise and thrive Written:08/02/2016 Contest:'Pandemonium' by John Hamilton

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 8/8/2016 9:47:00 PM
Sara, good write congratulations on your win Hugs Eve
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Sara Chansarkar
Date: 8/9/2016 9:50:00 AM
Thanks Eve!
Date: 8/8/2016 1:12:00 PM
A 7 for your WINNING poem, Sara! Janice
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Sara Chansarkar
Date: 8/9/2016 9:50:00 AM
Thanks Janice!
Date: 8/7/2016 6:49:00 PM
Sara, congrats on your placement in the contest! :)-luloo
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Sara Chansarkar
Date: 8/9/2016 9:50:00 AM
Thanks a lot Laura!
Date: 8/7/2016 6:41:00 PM
Compact yet full of the fears that make for 'pandemonium', Sara. Congratulations on your fine podium win. Hugs, Sandra
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Sara Chansarkar
Date: 8/9/2016 9:50:00 AM
Thanks dear Sandra!
Date: 8/7/2016 6:20:00 AM
Well done great word gl xxxxx
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Sara Chansarkar
Date: 8/9/2016 9:49:00 AM
Thanks Wendy!
Date: 8/3/2016 3:23:00 PM
I like how you summed it up with brief yet very interesting lines that are relevant to the topic. Well done, Sara.
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Sara Chansarkar
Date: 8/8/2016 9:43:00 AM
Thanks Andrea!

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