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Palettes of Red Dawn

’..’.’’……. red dawn tickles flirting dragonflies on palettes kissing wind’s delight clusters of boughs glint on trees cuddling nectar on arms, sun whispers love a twirling feast all creation sipping dew! © *Inspiration from the best dawn scenes in the world: Santa Monica - CA, The Rocks- Australia, Waikiki Beach-Hawaii, Boracay Isle-Philippines …….. . .. …. … Contest: Linda- Marie’s Poetic Art By nette onclaud

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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 2/17/2012 1:04:00 PM

Congrats to you! This is beautiful, but all your writing is lovely. Blessings, Rhonda

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 2/16/2012 8:44:00 PM

On of my favorites in this contest. Bravo on your well deserved win.

Wilma Neels

Date: 2/16/2012 12:18:00 PM

Congratulations Nette on your win with this beauty *hugs* Wilma

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 2/16/2012 5:23:00 AM

Congratulations nette Beautiful xx

Samual Ronthorpe

Date: 2/15/2012 5:07:00 PM

Nette, another winning poem, well deserved. Harry, this is a wonderful work. Congrats on your 5th place win in Linda-Marie's contest...................S.Ronthorpe

Robert Pettit

Date: 2/15/2012 1:27:00 PM

Congratulations on your win Nette. Written superbly as usual.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 2/15/2012 11:25:00 AM

Congratulations on your super win in Linda Marie's "Poetic Art" contest Nette. Love, Carol

Dinda Minardi

Date: 2/15/2012 10:04:00 AM

Wow, this is magical. Congrats on your win :)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/15/2012 9:52:00 AM

congrats Nedtte luv on fifth place win for this gorgeous array of lovely words.. your palettes are always a treasure.. thankxxx luv..

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 2/12/2012 6:48:00 AM

Excellent entry that Im sure will rise high in the contest.... luv this piece.... luv n hugs Michael

Lizanne Scholtz

Date: 2/11/2012 4:07:00 PM

wonderful picture you paint her nette, good luck in contest love Elizabeth

S.Jagathsimhan Nair

Date: 2/11/2012 6:50:00 AM

nette, you have not only the poetic art but poetic heart too, luv, jag

Kash Poet

Date: 2/10/2012 11:06:00 PM

The poems I write here are mostly my imagination except few .....

Kash Poet

Date: 2/10/2012 11:03:00 PM

This is just amazing nette.It showcases your great poetic heart.Going to be a chart topper.(re your comment: I am not that type.Some men may be.That is my imagination:)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/10/2012 10:56:00 PM

thankxx Nette luv for supporting my contest.. just enteref your too so thankxx for clarification luv.. sometimes I confuse MR..haha.. goodf luck.. anxious to judge this one ..happy weekend..

Russell Sivey

Date: 2/10/2012 9:38:00 PM

Wow, what a divine write about various dawns! They would be a spectacle to see! "...palettes kissing wind's delight..." is a special line within your poem! I like how you ended the poem as well with the, "...sipping, dew!" What fantastic lines you have written! You've done awesome with this write! Great Work!!