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Pale Mood

Sadly she sits on her brand new couch with ease Sitting elegantly in her midday dress Her wine sits on a table, it seems a tease She looks sad just like someone that could care less Her white cat lies at the foot of her settee She rubs the belly of the lovely kitty The woman sighs with an emphatic exhale Her grief ignited by her mood that is pale Russell Sivey

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 2/5/2014 3:54:00 PM
RS, Wonderful flow in this piece, as in all you works I have read; I looked expecting to see greatness, and you did not disappoint!...really good work!//Sinclair
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Date: 2/3/2014 7:48:00 PM
I enjoyed your representation of this woman with a pale mood. Loved the white kitty in the picture too.
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Date: 2/3/2014 7:22:00 AM
how perfectly you paint this picture I can see her sat there lovely Russell great pen Shadow x smile hug have added Lure of moon to my favs
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Date: 2/2/2014 11:53:00 AM
again your beautiful words find a way to stir up my heart with wistful thoughts of pognancy, russell... what a poetic mood you created; this isimpeccab;y written.. i sigh, sigh!.. huggs
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Date: 2/2/2014 11:02:00 AM
A sad picture Russell....but oh so lovely written....
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Date: 2/2/2014 10:08:00 AM
love this touching write, my friend
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Date: 2/2/2014 3:42:00 AM
A good one Russell,many are such people today, may the Lord help the world. Great work. Kayod5.
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Date: 2/2/2014 12:07:00 AM
This is a nice read. Makes you think why is doesn't she care. What is/was the wine for?.....Beautiful.....Tim
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