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Pale Green Eyes

` I woke on Sunday morning to see, the gaze of a man looking back at me. A man whose life was lost in fears shattered dreams and wasted years. A man whose weathered face and callused hands bore dark shadows and wrinkled skin. I stared into those pale green eyes saw the pain, each held inside. So filled with hurt and deep despair I stood in silence and watched him there The down side of life in that room where he slept I turned from the mirror and wept

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Date: 1/17/2022 5:59:00 AM
Wow Patrick that is so very beautiful and so well written. I love it! Debx
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Date: 1/20/2022 12:04:00 PM
Thanks Deb, I notice that you are a writing machine. I try to read you and others most nights. I like to hear from Down Under, just makes the world smaller. Hard to believe. Write more with the Aussie flavor. I bloody like like it.

Book: Shattered Sighs