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Palatable and Charitable

__Attestation to our sweet dreams__ We can’t beef We’re far from it We can’t leave We’re richer than that We can apologize When we’re wrong We can publicize When we’re strong We’re not mad We’re conscious of time And so we’ll be heard At exactly the time We have depth in us We dream of what is feasible We’re wise and a brilliant source… We’re meaningful and capable All we have in our desires are real And they are worth in our dreams Medals and wordsmith meal Are perhaps minimal in our rhythm? We struggle in the battle We lock horn that is realizable Our visions abound- aren’t rattle They are palatable and charitable.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 6/13/2013 12:32:00 AM
Loved the title and your message... may you always see the value within you and in the others you pass by. Appreciate your visits earlier on several of my poems... much obliged!
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Date: 6/7/2013 9:29:00 AM
I like both the rhythm and energy I feel in your poem bro..Nicely penned!
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Date: 6/6/2013 11:58:00 PM
so I see this won a contest? Congrats to you. you sure have a way with words. Great message in this one.
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Date: 6/6/2013 10:25:00 PM
Hi Abdulhafeez, Congratulations!!! :-) very dreamy --what I was looking for when it comes to night themes. always & forever Linda.... Goodnight
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Abdulhafeez Oyewole
Date: 6/17/2013 6:14:00 AM
Thanks for the placement.
Date: 6/5/2013 5:04:00 AM
This is so beautiful and inspirational poem my dear friend, AO. Thank you so much for sharing. I'm stopping by also to thank you for my win in your contest. It's my great honor. Thank you soo much! love and hugs, Leonora
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Date: 6/4/2013 4:30:00 PM
much depth in this lovely work... you light the page with dreamy images.... make a wish!..:) huggs
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Date: 6/4/2013 9:14:00 AM
Abdul, wonderful words within your poem, great work and I want to thank you so much for my placement in your In Honour and Appreciation Contest, I am very honoured, constance
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