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Palatable and Charitable

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Palatable and Charitable

__Attestation to our sweet dreams__

We can’t beef
We’re far from it
We can’t leave
We’re richer than that

We can apologize
When we’re wrong
We can publicize
When we’re strong

We’re not mad
We’re conscious of time
And so we’ll be heard
At exactly the time

We have depth in us
We dream of what is feasible
We’re wise and a brilliant source…
We’re meaningful and capable

All we have in our desires are real
And they are worth in our dreams
Medals and wordsmith meal
Are perhaps minimal in our rhythm?

We struggle in the battle
We lock horn that is realizable
Our visions abound- aren’t rattle  
They are palatable and charitable.

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  1. Date: 6/13/2013 12:32:00 AM
    Loved the title and your message... may you always see the value within you and in the others you pass by. Appreciate your visits earlier on several of my poems... much obliged!

  1. Date: 6/7/2013 9:29:00 AM
    I like both the rhythm and energy I feel in your poem bro..Nicely penned!

  1. Date: 6/6/2013 11:58:00 PM
    so I see this won a contest? Congrats to you. you sure have a way with words. Great message in this one.

  1. Date: 6/6/2013 10:25:00 PM
    Hi Abdulhafeez, Congratulations!!! :-) very dreamy --what I was looking for when it comes to night themes. always & forever Linda.... Goodnight

    Oyewole Avatar Abdulhafeez Oyewole
    Date: 6/17/2013 6:14:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for the placement.
  1. Date: 6/5/2013 5:04:00 AM
    This is so beautiful and inspirational poem my dear friend, AO. Thank you so much for sharing. I'm stopping by also to thank you for my win in your contest. It's my great honor. Thank you soo much! love and hugs, Leonora

  1. Date: 6/4/2013 4:30:00 PM
    much depth in this lovely work... you light the page with dreamy images.... make a wish!..:) huggs

  1. Date: 6/4/2013 9:14:00 AM
    Abdul, wonderful words within your poem, great work and I want to thank you so much for my placement in your In Honour and Appreciation Contest, I am very honoured, constance