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Painting Life

Painting life Trapped and bound inside his majesty castle Brightly shown need of purify Not in the sake one glory Extracting life out of misery Tranquility unto turmoil souls Unveil true identity infinite ability Remedy for unseen wound Lonely path god and statues journey of one soul Passage of mystic and unknown Reconstruct …. Unseen wound Saint and sinner Bless yet doom Cost of nature Necessity to sacrifice On every path of life Blesses souls who tasted life… May 6 09 (if its a poem then am dreamin ) copy right reserve

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Date: 8/25/2011 11:25:00 AM
This is wonderful, Isa. I liked this a lot. Left me ponder about life.
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Date: 7/28/2010 7:48:00 PM
Well done in the contest,,late congratulations. Enjoyed your poem,, you have much to express,..p.d.
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Date: 10/23/2009 8:39:00 AM
Beautifully poised indeed. I truly enjoyed reading it. All the best.
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Date: 10/16/2009 5:31:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in Matt's contest Isa. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/9/2009 11:05:00 AM
Nice one, i like it. Keep it up. And by the way thanks for the commen
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Date: 10/8/2009 6:54:00 PM
Thank you carolyn and Sara would love to explore is there any discusion forum here or being friend to discuss and interact with poets ? i need to learn more pls inform me :)
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Date: 10/8/2009 10:59:00 AM
The power of this journey gave me chills, Isa. How else could one paint life. It is a lonely journey for saints and sinners alike. Beautiful writing! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 10/8/2009 10:57:00 AM
Really like the last stanza. Nicely done. Welcome to soup. You have soup mail. Sara
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