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Painter My life was painted Long before I arrived I follow the paint brush Alone, left to surmise If I belong in a painting Or on a road to nowhere at all Life is so black and white Colors have faded away from eye sight Along the promenades of loneliness Were no able painter would stay I follow my destiny, as I Gracefully fade away

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Carol B.

Date: 9/19/2016 1:35:00 PM

Excellent write. A fav.

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 9/19/2016 3:45:00 AM

Life is so black and white...and We are that shade of grey...Sometimes a rainbow appears in that grayish rain...We fail to see it..Maybe...but its there...Love reading yr poetry Arthuro.

The Grahamburglar

Date: 9/18/2016 6:08:00 PM

I love the implication of this write. Perhaps we would all do well to add a little color to the world around us. Excellent write, Arthur, and thanks for sharing your inspiring talent. -G

Manmath Dalei

Date: 9/18/2016 1:02:00 PM

Everyone will fade away with loneliness....very deep write, Arthur. Enjoyed ur poem. Title is well matched. A7 from me............// hugs//Manmath//.........

Probir Gupta

Date: 9/18/2016 7:13:00 AM

Nice ... a little heavy ... Still reading you is a pleasure ...

Tim Smith

Date: 9/17/2016 9:10:00 PM

great poem Arthur....you only have 60 more years left so you better stock up