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Painted Wings

Nature has its beauty, Gliding through the sky. Going from flower to flower, Yet slowly passing by. I see her wings of canvas, With the shapes and lines. Of broad and thin strokes, Made by hands divine. As she begins to flutter, Her little heart still sings. I’m attracted by the color, Amongst her painted wings.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 5/21/2009 9:21:00 PM
wow i like this poem loads very lovely keep it up kiddo=]]TinkBabyy
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Date: 5/17/2009 1:29:00 AM
Beautiful poem Raul, i like this a lot, James
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Date: 1/3/2009 5:40:00 PM
Smile~I loved this precious write of wonderful colors and pictures of "Your & Gods" creation here! For you see~I can always tell~When "God" is moving within "His Children!"~"Beautiful Write Raul!"~"My Love To You & All Your Loves, Always, John!"~"Happy New Year Brother!"~Bye:)
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Date: 1/3/2009 7:40:00 AM
Hi Raul, Thank you for your comment on Pamphlets of Prophets...........this is a very pretty and very delicate poem, your choice of words, uncluttered and uncomplicated add to an almost fairy like quality to its reading... very well written my friend !
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Date: 12/30/2008 9:52:00 PM
I just love the simple yet beautiful way you wrote this. Such vivid imagery this was amazing. you are an amazing writer, I will surely be back to read more :) Blessings, ~Michaela~
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Date: 12/28/2008 1:53:00 AM
Nice poem, it reminds me of someone I know with my love for her fluttering like a butterfly ~Caramel
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Date: 12/28/2008 1:09:00 AM
Butterflies are nice to watch, this is a wonderful poem. DN
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Date: 12/26/2008 1:55:00 PM
Raul, this is beautiful. The imagery is wonderful. I love butterflies. God has given us so much beauty to fill our senses. Awesome write! Love Robin
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Date: 12/26/2008 11:42:00 AM
Wow! I am partial to anything butterfly related. This is brilliant in it's beauty. Thank you so very much kind friend for all those comments the other day! Sorry i could not reply as I was caught up in the holiday madness! All the happiness your heart can hold in the new year. Love, Shar
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Date: 12/25/2008 12:54:00 AM
So peacefull =D...thank you for the warm comments...tc...Sara...
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Date: 12/24/2008 10:25:00 AM
Thanks for your comment, I like yours too. Since you have many poems would you please help me in categorizing my poem 'Fear Not For I Bring To You Tiding Of Great Joy' right now I have it as free verse do you think heroic is better if not what? Thanks again Rick
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Date: 12/23/2008 4:36:00 PM
Sweet poem, I love butterflies. I appreciate your warm comments on my poetry. Love Elizabeth
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Date: 12/23/2008 9:30:00 AM
Raul, this is beautiful! I am going to have to fav it now! hehe :) Butterflies are such a wonderful symbol of life and hope, I found this really inspiring. Thank you so much for your very kind commets on my haikus, they are appreciated. I am a nature lover and this really spoke to me. God bless and have a wonderful holiday. :) Amy
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Date: 12/23/2008 8:11:00 AM
Wow Raul, as always I loved this write as you write so beautifully this made me smile throughout and I adore butterflies and their painted wings of such glorious colors thank you for your comments I love reading your poems Happy Holidays to you and your family and God Bless
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Date: 12/23/2008 3:38:00 AM
Wow, just perfectly beautiful in very single way, amazing.love, Kristin
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Date: 12/22/2008 9:01:00 PM
It was the title that drew me in, but I absolutely love the picture painted in this quatrain.
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Date: 12/22/2008 8:03:00 PM
A beautiful and serene Quatrain, Raul. I love the way it feels that nature is the artist, painting this beautiful wonder! ...Oh and thank you for your comment on my ee cummings....and pointing out my I's! I will correct that ....something I overlooked...habit I guess!! Thank you very much! :) Carrie
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Date: 12/22/2008 5:33:00 PM
Raul this is beautiful. So tender and full of truth. Michael
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Date: 12/22/2008 4:32:00 PM
Raul this is just beautiful. I love the imagery, it just makes me smile. Laurie
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