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Painted Lady

The evening sun reclines, dips her trailing skirts into the fire; she lounges on the edge of dusk, her sultry lips, crimson desire. With violet tints, her painted eyes, brazen behind a blushing cloud, stare at every lake and pond to view the beauty she's endowed. We sigh to see her slip beyond the rim of sight; her lovely face may never be just quite the same as now, framed by the black tree lace. Faye Lanham Gibson

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Date: 3/31/2022 10:05:00 AM
Congrats on your winning work in Brian's contest. Way to go. Sara
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Date: 7/29/2014 2:11:00 PM
Faye, Congratulations, in Andrea's "Let's Get Technical contest:)" Loving life's how it goes.... LINDA
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Date: 7/28/2014 8:54:00 PM
this is just beautiful! congrats on a well-deserved win!
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Date: 7/28/2014 5:59:00 AM
this is a beautiful personification of sunset, lovely use of colour - ironically, exactly the sort of thing I was talking about for my vibrant verse contest! this is very vibrant - congrats on your win! :)
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Date: 7/27/2014 5:12:00 PM
Oh! dear Faye! This is such a breathtaking, beautiful picture you have painted.. bravo!!.. Congrats on a great win, my poetic friend..
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Date: 7/27/2014 3:32:00 PM
Interesting take on the sunset. But profound. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 7/27/2014 2:29:00 PM
The personification is just marvelous...!! Lovely poem !!!
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Date: 7/27/2014 12:21:00 PM
Faye,this is perfect in every way. Though I don't like when poets use spellings like "ev'ning" I could not think of anything else I did not like about this gem. GREAT technical writing that captures nature's beauty. Congrats for your fine win in my contest.
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Faye Gibson
Date: 7/27/2014 12:54:00 PM
Thank you so much, Andrea, for my placement in your contest. I appreciate your comments and will work to incorporate them into my writing; I see the value in what you say.
Date: 6/26/2014 7:48:00 PM
This is really very enjoyable to read, Faye. What a beautiful picture you have painted. I think I'll read it again. Very nice..... Robert.
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Date: 6/11/2014 4:36:00 PM
Beautiful work Faye, I'll remember "Her trailing skirts...." whenever I see a sunset. Thank you!
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Date: 5/17/2014 9:27:00 PM
This poem was written just beautifully, Faye. Very enjoyable! Congratulations on a well deserved first place win!
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Date: 5/17/2014 2:00:00 PM
Oh, Faye, your use of personification here is amazing. What a wonderful poem! Congratulations on your win! Carolyn
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Date: 5/17/2014 9:56:00 AM
Oh goodness, the descriptions are so wonderful ! Lovely poem, Faye! Congratulations!!
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Date: 5/16/2014 8:47:00 AM
Some great phrase in this..my favorite " she lounges on the edge of dusk."..congrats. BG
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Date: 5/16/2014 5:18:00 AM
Wow a great romantic one ! Congrats Faye on a huge deserved win !
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Date: 5/16/2014 4:16:00 AM
Faye I love the romance of this poem congrats on win hugs
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Faye Gibson
Date: 5/19/2014 2:47:00 PM
Thank you, Shadow.
Date: 5/12/2014 9:17:00 AM
Wonderful poem Faye...stunning
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Faye Gibson
Date: 5/15/2014 6:06:00 PM
very much appreciated.
Date: 5/12/2014 8:25:00 AM
Oh my goodness,Faye! What an exquisitely beautiful "word picture" you've created! I truly enjoyed it. Thank you for sharing "Into the Sunlight. Jack C
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Faye Gibson
Date: 5/15/2014 6:06:00 PM
Thank you, Jack. Your feedback is much appreciated.
Date: 5/8/2014 10:13:00 PM
wowowow, best personification I saw all night. FAVE
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Faye Gibson
Date: 5/9/2014 12:29:00 PM
Thank you so much, Andrea...this one was a true joy to write.
Date: 5/8/2014 6:47:00 PM
Faye, loved that last line, a great visual.
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Faye Gibson
Date: 5/9/2014 12:26:00 PM
Thanks, John. I appreciate your visit and comments.
Date: 5/8/2014 4:47:00 PM
This is so lovely Faye! deserves a 7 rating! You have used brilliant strokes to paint a beautiful sunset. Flows so easily helped by fitting rhyme. // paul
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Faye Gibson
Date: 5/9/2014 12:26:00 PM
Thank you, Paul...Come back anytime.

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