Paint of War

hand of nature splashes paint on war's canvas, dipped in black tones Contest sponsored by Silent One, Monoku 4: Colors 3rd Jan 2018

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Date: 1/5/2018 8:48:00 PM

Nicely done, Leon. Congrats for your win.

Date: 1/5/2018 4:21:00 PM

A deep and thought provoking monoku, Leon, beautifully expressed. Congratulations on your wonderful win. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Date: 1/5/2018 1:08:00 PM

deep and poignant, great one, congrats : )-luloo

Date: 1/5/2018 3:49:00 AM

Very deep ... Makes the reader thoughtful ... Congratulations on your excellent win ...

Date: 1/4/2018 12:15:00 PM

- Hi Leon, congratulations on your winning line :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Date: 1/4/2018 11:33:00 AM

Terrific write Leon, congratulations...

Date: 1/4/2018 11:06:00 AM

Great monoku. Congrats on your win, Leon.

Date: 1/4/2018 9:18:00 AM

You expressed the dark feelings of war extremely well, Leon. Congratulations on placing first! Regards // paul

Date: 1/4/2018 7:58:00 AM

War helps no one.. deep one liner Leon..Congratulations on your first place in the colours monoku contest