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Painful Rain

I sit and watch as the rain falls from a sky so dark and gray Is this life a crying sky if so, not even I can fight I'm tired of hurting I'm tired of tears I'm tired of being alone for all these years I want peace and I want love I want to break free to fly above!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 11/6/2015 12:06:00 PM
Hey Gagan, a warm and hearty congratulations on your winning poem in the Screwed 7 contest! A poem of loneliness, sad and filled with longing, but be of good cheer - you are not alone. Excellent writing. Be Blessed, Neva
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Date: 11/5/2015 12:10:00 PM
Gagan, congrats on your win in Rob Carmack's contest. SKAT
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Date: 11/4/2015 10:17:00 PM
Congrats on huge win Gagan with this superb write!
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Date: 8/30/2015 12:13:00 PM
if you feel the pain wont stop....you just have to drop....down on bended knee....and simply say Father Please Help me....;)
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Date: 8/27/2015 8:00:00 AM
Spread your wings and fly, I know how it hurts to hurt, be strong and write on, it helps :)
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