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Pain Pain, Go Away

* * * * * * * * * * pain pain go away, why are you hear to stay? * * my heart breaks. Your like a snake. * * my soul you will not take. * * * * * * * *

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Danesh Morgan

Date: 7/26/2013 12:24:00 AM

close enough for me, hidden meaning to read, hidden message to see, just what are you saying? . . . . ha ha ha very sweet and nice thank you

Carson Jones
Date: 7/27/2013 11:15:00 PM

The poem is about the pain and heart break people go through, and the picture could be taken in as a tear on a cheek or as a rain drop on a building. Thanks for checking it out.

April Gabriella

Date: 7/15/2013 12:57:00 AM

I really like this. It's short but speaks volumes. Nicely done!