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Pain of Parting

Pain of parting As parting slivers my heart and leaves my soul bleeding, Memories of togetherness turn into thorns of prickly longing. Written Dec 28th, 2015 For "deep and dark" poetry contest Sponsor- Broken Wings Awarded HM

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/15/2016 10:12:00 PM

DR UPMA, congratulations on your win!!! XOX ~LINDA~

Skat A

Date: 1/8/2016 7:32:00 PM

Dr Upma, Congratulations on your Deep and Dark win. **SKAT**

James Inman

Date: 1/8/2016 11:00:00 AM

Beautiful short write. Heartbreaking emotions.

Teddy Kimathi

Date: 1/8/2016 7:50:00 AM

Very emotional verse indeed..... Congrats for your WIN in the contest Dr. Upma! ;-)

Lin Lane

Date: 1/8/2016 3:59:00 AM

I loved your choice of words, Upma. Well done.

Eve Roper

Date: 1/7/2016 9:52:00 PM

Dr. Upma A. Sharma, Congratulations on your win!