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Pain of Delight

IF IT HURTS SO BAD WHY DO WE DO IT CONTEST Sponsor: Silent One The pain of delight is why I choose to feel, The afterglow of choices brings me gravity, Hurting so bad is how I choose to heal, The less I choose to know the more depravity. The reasons behind my decisions can’t be defined, For life makes circumstances tough to reveal, My only hope is that my pain is not designed, In a way that my soul begins to utterly conceal. Beliefs in miracles rearrange my train of thought, Changes and chances brings a life so confined, For justice I have so hard trained for and fought, I see the distance with right and wrong combined. There are possibilities beyond the eye of my inner core, For years there have been opportunities I have sought, But the truth be told I could not ask for more, There are times I act wildly and never get caught. My motives for my pain have not answered my reasons, My pain brings much more happiness than before, Why do I keep going when I hurt for many seasons? Because the pain of delight is what I choose to adore. Rhyme Scheme: ABAB-CACA-DCDC-EDED-FEFE Date Written: June 17, 2016

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Date: 6/25/2016 8:04:00 AM
Nice spin on the contest and congrats on your 2nd place win! Jesse
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Date: 6/18/2016 8:08:00 PM
I agree with Jo down here. It's poignantly expressed and it's great when you do a personal one that tells us about YOU, Laura Loo. I enjoyed the rhyme scheme in this one too.
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Date: 6/18/2016 3:57:00 AM
This is so poignantly expressed:) I'm sure it will do well in the contest, Laura:)
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Date: 6/18/2016 12:36:00 PM
Thank you very much Jo :)-luloo

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