Pain

Pain wears a face In awkward trace Pain hijacks feel As hurts now grill Pain comes to show In teary flow Pain stabs and cuts Beyond mere gut Pain follows pain To hurt again Leon Enriquez 18 November 2016 Singapore

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Carol B.

Date: 11/19/2016 9:19:00 PM

Great couplet :) You captured pain very well.

Leon Enriquez
Date: 11/21/2016 6:49:00 PM

Dear Carol: Thank you for the good wishes. Healing will take some time but the pain is easing away. :) Cheers! Leon

Carol B.
Date: 11/21/2016 3:42:00 PM

Oh my gosh so sorry. I hope you recover soon!

Leon Enriquez
Date: 11/20/2016 10:34:00 PM

Dear Carol: Thank you. Yes, I can relate to the intensed pain of a twisted spinal nerve on my lower back when I over stretched when I was handing a tea cup to a visitor at home. Now walking like a robot after acupuncture treatment. And the pain is much more than words can say! Leon