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Pain

I felt a painful blain, during the feverish slackening of repeating rain The pain far worse than a usual swell, reminds me how it rains in hell If the drops could not perish from their comfort zone, my wound would want to make a moan More than a red mark; as the rain continues, I felt my wound hit by a spark The pain goes on like a wheel cart, only stopped when it loses its spiel I wished the hectic drops would retreat, one step to become a memorable defeat

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Date: 11/11/2015 6:23:00 PM
Nice poem Nevis, pain is hard to overcome. Thanks for sharing. Pete Yuhas
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Nevis Devulyte
Date: 11/14/2015 8:01:00 PM
Thank you. It's nice of you acknowledging my poem.

Book: Shattered Sighs