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Pain

Around, all around the angels gather. My dread grows as the headsman's axe falls against my neck. It severs me, and my darkly my blood drips to the grass while death flows. Now alone, my blood falls upon bleeding eyes. This is my hell

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 6/25/2016 10:39:00 PM
NICE TO READ THIS ONE AGAIN, CHRIS. SKAT
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Date: 7/19/2015 9:08:00 PM
Chris,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 7/19/2015 1:20:00 PM
Chris,, a sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT""
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Date: 7/18/2015 5:41:00 AM
- With smiles and joy I welcome you to P-Soup, Chris :) - Hope you will find this poem page interesting and post many more poems in the future - Have a great experience together here with us in "the poems world" - I wish you every success - // Anne-Lise :)
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