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Pain

She sits alone, and nobody sees, The tears that fall, unknown she wants it to be. Nobody understands, or feels her pain, Nobody sees the cuts along her veins. She has no one to turn to, No one whom she can call, a friend. Her arrivals to the doctor are a waste Because no conclusion is out, by all this strain. Her father finds it to be a mental disorder The doctor says its depression, And her brother says its grief, But she the poor girl, hiding herself in disbelief..... Her wretched face brings extreme anger on everyone’s face. But no one seems to understand that the girl is dying And she is going far away, she is all alone, she is tired because no one is there with whom she can share her PAIN........

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Date: 12/25/2015 3:43:00 PM
Crystal, thank you for sharing your poem *** Merry Christmas and Happy New Year! SKAT
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Date: 2/19/2015 10:20:00 AM
Hi Crystal, this is very deep, your poem reminds me of the times I felt all alone, no one to share my pain with. Depression's not a pretty picture. I give your poem a 7. Enjoyed.... LINDA
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Date: 8/15/2014 2:09:00 AM
A poignant sadening poem writen n expressd excellently in great meter. Kudos. Nice to read u again
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Date: 4/14/2014 5:56:00 AM
oh that is sad. it is hard to feel so much pain. my empathy's. thank you for sharing. pain and lonelyness are such real and honest emotions but no one needs go through it alone.
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