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Pain

Lie back, relax, do not fight me no, do not scream or even cry it will be over soon you will see now open wide, no, no much wider Trembling, she did as she was told feeling him close leaning over her aching from being forced to open so wide wishing with all her might that it was done Hold still now, I will done in a minute as he leaned over her tugging so hard at last it gave up its grip and popped out the awful tooth that had caused such pain

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Date: 7/8/2015 4:54:00 PM
Know the feeling. Finally found a good one, almost painless.
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Date: 1/15/2014 9:10:00 PM
Yeowch! I hate having to go to the dentist, I've had my share of tooth aches and pains to know why she wanted that tooth out! I really enjoyed reading this tremendous poem this evening my friend! What a glorious piece, such a fantastic poem! Great Work!!
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 1/17/2014 6:41:00 PM
hi Russell it is the worse pain of all I think ty for your comments Shadow x smile hug
Date: 1/15/2014 7:42:00 PM
Owww!
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 1/15/2014 7:43:00 PM
lol hug

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