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If I could have one wish come true,
good health I'd choose for me and you.
Wealth is something you can gain
but I'd give it all
to be free of pain.
It's true that wealth can buy a lot
but a cure the doctors have not got.
Being in pain everyday,
I'd give anything for it to go away.
My pills give me a small release
but ultimately they're just a tease.
Please time, heal me fast,
make me well
and make it last.

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  1. Date: 2/13/2014 6:24:00 PM
    I think we sing from the same hymn sheet jenny i believe if you have your health you are truly wealthy. love Jan xxx

  1. Date: 2/12/2014 11:35:00 PM
    Money isn't everything. When you've got your health, you have the most important thing of all. Good write.

  1. Date: 9/17/2013 4:34:00 PM
    Such painful pleasure to read!

  1. Date: 9/12/2013 2:40:00 PM
    Simple, yet deep & honest between the lines. Very nicely done!

  1. Date: 9/12/2013 11:48:00 AM
    Well expressed verse Dear Poetess. I like verses that convey life's simplicities... Keep your pen flowing so your ink doesn't dry... Smile and take good care, Cindy