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of suffering deep, tween pain and asleep, and the curse still lingers like crime, a fiendish mind wheels, still turning out deals, and slip-sliding thoughts to begrime, get back in your box, un-sweet albatross, begone to the nethers of mind, bad voices are still, mourning their loss, in spirit i'm doing just fine, got a grip on its throat, never mind, bad thoughts continue to gloat, yet the battle is mine, bloody mine... of: p.d. "Cronic Pain" Don

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  1. Date: 9/20/2012 4:55:00 PM
    You describe it well, I know chronic pain to well. NICE WRITE MATE

  1. Date: 9/16/2012 11:14:00 AM
    nicely written poem friend Don....thanks for sharing :) have a nice day!!

  1. Date: 9/16/2012 10:55:00 AM
    Woah, what a tremendously incredible write my friend! I am amazed with the power of your words you show within this poem Don! I really enjoyed this delightful little write this afternoon! You ingenious of a poem sure moves mountains with its intrigue, I love this piece, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 9/16/2012 5:33:00 AM
    and the battle rages in these lines and between the pages. Good as it gets Don. nice ingenious descript

  1. Date: 9/16/2012 4:25:00 AM
    Good on you Harry old mate, words to plow or incinerate, just wafflin at ya now:)

  1. Date: 9/16/2012 3:18:00 AM
    here Don, this is bloody brilliant, what can i say.. to my fav along with you.........