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Pain

my heart bet frantically as i wandered alone wrath embraced me but it was on my own this wistful feeling clouded me as i tried to run running is never an option when ur destination is none each vision of my past formed a wraith unable to erase i prayed this doesnt last i tried to escape from this and fastened my pace as wrath of my own embraced me i tried to cry away the pain didnt try anymore to break free cause i knew it will be in vain

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Nivedita Anbuchelvan

Date: 9/4/2011 3:34:00 AM

Hey guys I really like ur comments and I thank all of U. I am also interested in writing my own books can pls tel me a website were I could post it?

Wilma Neels

Date: 6/2/2011 1:58:00 AM

Nivedita, congratulations on your win in Pd's contest :) WN

Skat A

Date: 6/2/2011 12:54:00 AM

grats on your awesome contest entry Luv*Skat

Ralph Taylor

Date: 6/1/2011 7:49:00 AM

Congrats on your win, Nivedita. Nice going. Ralph

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 6/1/2011 7:20:00 AM

Congratulations on the win in the contest of p.d., nivedita

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/1/2011 6:03:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved win in P.D.'s contest Nivedita. Love, Carol

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/1/2011 12:31:00 AM

N.A.!~ CONGRATS!! In my first poem contest, & thank U so much once again 4 supporting my contest. I had a great time reading & judging every entry in my contest. Thanks for being among all my chosen winners. have a great one,.. always~~~Poet D

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/31/2011 9:43:00 PM

super congrats on your excellent win in this contest luv..

Nivedita Anbuchelvan
Date: 5/31/2011 11:06:00 PM

wat contes i dont get it?????????

Raghavendra Prabhu

Date: 5/30/2011 4:27:00 AM

Wonderful Write Nivedita...Loved your lines from 1 to 9..Keep'em coming...

Gwendolen Song

Date: 5/23/2011 8:31:00 AM

Hey...waiting on an encore! Got more!?.... Have a lovely afternoon. Gwendolen

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/23/2011 4:16:00 AM

A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Nivedita. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol

Ajith Fredjeev

Date: 5/23/2011 1:50:00 AM

Nivedita, the poem sounds tuned and nice. Its got an empathetic feel and the best lines i liked are the first 4 that truly say something. Gudos! Fredjeev

Faizah Spence

Date: 5/22/2011 7:14:00 PM

Wow, I feel your poem and the pain. Very deep. Be well thanks for sharing, ~Faizah

Gwendolen Song

Date: 5/22/2011 12:48:00 PM

It seems as though sadness and despair are common themes today with the newer poets. Your own wrath embraced you in this heartfelt write,...it almost sounds like a bad nightmare when you can't even run from yourself...thanks for sharing this emotional write. May you find blessings in the littlest things this day, Gwendolen

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/21/2011 9:35:00 AM

Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your amazing creative poetry ... hope u have fun on PS as u share with luv.. come celebrate my birthday with me today .. enjoy with luv..

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 5/21/2011 9:29:00 AM

Lovely write on the wistful feelings or wishful feelings

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/21/2011 9:28:00 AM

N. A. , welcome to the soup.. pain,, is not the reflection that should flow thru one... nice description on the way pain can cloud ones motion and every thing else... thanks for sharing,..Linda