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Pain

Pain is indescribable It strives to devour every inch of you And it has no mercy Pain is a monster Living inside you Eating you alive Pain is a wild raging fire Engulfing every part of you Burning a hole in your heart Pain leaves you expressionless It’s what makes your tears bitter It’s what makes you bleed inside It wants your world to collapse It’s what makes you fall apart It’s what leaves you hopeless Pain is a journey A very cruel and difficult journey But one that I am taking with you I am with you every step you take Not to guide you But to live this nightmare with you Your pain is like carrying the world on your shoulders And nothing can take it away But I will take your hand and help you carry it Pain creates the most terrible wounds But in time they will heal, leaving painful scars But also beautiful memories It feels like your life has fallen to pieces But pure love will piece it back together God’s love

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 5/27/2015 2:47:00 AM
Hi Skat! Thank you so much for your comment! Means a great deal to me that you found enjoyment in my poetry :) hope you're well! Xx
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Date: 5/26/2015 5:56:00 PM
Amy, Stopping by to enjoy this Favorite poem of mine. .... Always ~SKAT~
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Date: 10/29/2010 6:20:00 PM
impressive , Amy! pain is a monster. Adding this to my favorites. Girl, i also have a dog I named PAIN. only because i know how pianful life will be and he won't.. he's just a dog. And will never know the love of God.. Bye ~luv*Skat
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Date: 10/5/2010 6:14:00 AM
see excellent again my friend [duncan ]
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Date: 9/26/2010 5:38:00 PM
you describe the sensation so well. sorry to say...Amy welcome to poetry soup! glad to have a new victim! I mean writer...LOL
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Date: 9/26/2010 2:33:00 PM
interesting and deep write, enjoyed your write...P.D.
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Date: 9/26/2010 2:07:00 PM
What a fine expressions on Pain very nicely worded, Amy
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Date: 9/26/2010 12:53:00 PM
Very descriptive and expressive about pain of any kind...emotional, physical, and spiritual...One has to have had experienced it to be able to describe it so well..Sara
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