Pain

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this was an awful night that I struggled through going many times from zero to 9 or 10 and back to zero I would not wish such pain for any one but with our Lords help I made it through

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One lies there nice and relaxed then like being stabbed viciously Pain flashes up your leg time again digging in deep then even deeper. touching as it hides and then comes the needle its popped into your mouth you swallow blessed relief as gradually the pain fades to zero and you know deep inside its only hiding The nerves take time to recover to get back to normal but you know it will take at least another day to recover For now all is at peace what a joy blessed relief there's nothing like it

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Paige Hind

Date: 3/28/2024 6:20:00 PM

Wishing you health- I'm sorry you've been in pain. I remember my toothache from sometime back- OUCH. LOL-

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 3/29/2024 10:10:00 AM

hi Paige toothache is horrible ty dear hugs Shadow

Ink Empress

Date: 3/13/2024 3:13:00 PM

Dear shadow, first of all as i read your note it made me tear up, im so sorry dear shadow for the pain that youv been through, you are such a strong soul. And the fact that you were able to write through pain is impressive for me, and it shows you were born to write, dear poet, how soul hitting and well articulated. I especially love “ For now all is at peace what a joy blessed relief there's nothing like it“ brilliant ending. This is shows your strength. And hence, why, it is a fave for me. Sending you light always

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 3/13/2024 4:05:00 PM

Dearest Ink you are such a nice person ty for all your very kind words they mean the world to me big big hugs Shadow

Sotto Poet

Date: 3/13/2024 9:03:00 AM

I extend my deepest sympathy for the suffering you endured but find solace in the presence of divine support that saw you through to the end. I am relieved to know that you have safely returned home, and now is the time to focus on rest and healing. My sincerest well wishes to you, dear Shadow.

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 3/13/2024 9:38:00 AM

Sotto ty so much you have been a pillar of strength for me to lean against (hope I was not too heavy)your support means a lot to me hugs Shadow

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 3/13/2024 5:14:00 AM

Sounds awful, Shadow! Joy indeed as your pain is relieved. God bless you, sweet one!

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 3/13/2024 5:22:00 AM

yes its brilliant tnks be to our lord and the skill of my doctor James Colston ty Kim hugs Shadow

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/12/2024 10:01:00 PM

There is nothing like sweet from pain. I know it less and less as my conditions worsen but at least they are not life threatening. I bet others can relate to this one, Shadow. Sorry if you are going through awful stuff.

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 3/13/2024 1:16:00 AM

It has been a rough 3-4 weeks Andy I wrote it in hospital and tide it up last night. If you dont mind reading the blog I posted yesterday it tells you of the whole experience I am sorry you are suffering too from pain I know too well how it pulls you down ty for your visit hu8gs Shadow