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Packed With Love-Vision

As I gaze at my gorgeous lunch salad sings to me a sonorous love ballad! What’s dazzling about temporal food that calls for this surreal mood? The melting silk of shredded cheese, the sharp crunch of leafy lettuce, the crimson of tomatoes. All hold a spot arcane tucked behind the corridors mundane, oft murmurous with banal ‘I-love-you’, jewels, roses and boxed rocks so blue. The quiet gesture of you packing my meal with thoughtfulness and honest zeal makes my heart quiver with glee. Your love sprinkled in the foliage medley don’t know if any eye can see. Written 04/28/2016

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Date: 4/29/2016 7:24:00 AM
Sara, a wonderful poem... LINDA
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Sara Chansarkar
Date: 4/29/2016 8:12:00 AM
Thanks for the encouragement Linda!
Date: 4/28/2016 3:54:00 PM
Interesting poem, Sara. Well scripted. Barry
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Sara Chansarkar
Date: 4/29/2016 8:13:00 AM
Thanks Barry!

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