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Pacing Seasons

Burnished copper leaves pace butterfly’s wings as young maiden, pink dressed, leans dreading harsh winter’s bark © Debra Squyres 2/16/15 Written for: In Praise of Kimo –Using visual 1 Sponsor: Nette Onclaude

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Date: 3/20/2015 2:28:00 AM
Loved it Debra, congrats....Seren
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Date: 3/13/2015 4:08:00 PM
an interesting collection of descriptions, grats on your win!
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Date: 3/13/2015 2:04:00 PM
Congratulations on your winning verse. Light & Love
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Date: 3/13/2015 10:59:00 AM
Debra, congratulations on your nice win! I enjoyed your poetic interpretation of the visual. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 3/13/2015 7:45:00 AM
Dropping back with my congratulations Debra:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 2/20/2015 12:36:00 AM
Descriptive lines, Debra. I especially like the sound of line one!
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Date: 2/16/2015 5:19:00 PM
Debra you had me at "harsh winter's bark" I like it, hope it does well in the contest.
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Debra Squyres
Date: 2/17/2015 6:56:00 AM
Thank you, John !!
Date: 2/16/2015 1:16:00 PM
Good word choices moving the reader with their beauty and imagery. Emile #7
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Debra Squyres
Date: 2/17/2015 6:56:00 AM
Thank you, Emile!!
Date: 2/16/2015 12:08:00 PM
Absolutely delightful Debra good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Debra Squyres
Date: 2/16/2015 12:17:00 PM
Thank you, hugs !! xx
Date: 2/16/2015 11:40:00 AM
- A gem, dear Debra! (7) - I wish you best of luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Debra Squyres
Date: 2/16/2015 12:16:00 PM
Thank you !! :) hugs !! xx

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