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******************************P************************ Paranormal peasants of a pathetic and patient percentile perpetrate peace from perjury.. A patriarch, parallel to a peaceful partisan passage.. ******************************M************************ Meditation maliciously masks my mighty monogamous minx. Modestly managing my machismo, mastering my maturity. Jared Pickett 4/06/2010 Asavvy1

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Date: 5/2/2010 6:27:00 PM
Nice ones Jared!...he said.. as he unraveled his tongue. Love alliteration alot!-Robert -trying to work up subject for your Sestina.. brain appears to be fried temporarily ''at least I hope temporarily... ;)
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Date: 4/10/2010 10:18:00 PM
Marvellous Masterpieces...you made me smile Jared:)..Lovely..Charma.
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Date: 4/8/2010 12:33:00 PM
Thankxxx Lone Wolf ... where have ye been? and why so quiet? ... going to enter my second contest? .. luv.. "Sweetheart"
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Date: 4/8/2010 10:55:00 AM
The humor is overpowering I might have to run..LOL>.Sara
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Date: 4/8/2010 6:47:00 AM
That first line of the "m" words is brilliant. Great alliteration in both verses, Jared! Soup mail shortly. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 4/6/2010 10:42:00 PM
I enjoyed the poem with impressive alliteration
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Date: 4/6/2010 3:54:00 PM
Wonderful words with wisdom wandering within wondrous works ... especially enjoyed ending everso emphatic ...emotional elegance... nice alliteration too .. where u been? luv.. "Sweetheart"
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Date: 4/6/2010 3:34:00 PM
mmmm-pppleasing
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Date: 4/6/2010 2:34:00 PM
Wreally wonderfull write..wildy whimsical...BG
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