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https://s-media-cache- ak0.pinimg.com/236x/72/97/79/7297796a1920d9e3fb4a59ff6da498ab.jpg Pin 4198: Disney Gallery - Alice in Wonderland Series (Baby Oyster) Variations on The Walrus and the Carpenter" a narrative poem by Lewis Carroll that appeared in his book Through the Looking-Glass, published in December 1871. OYSTERS The tide was low the sun was high The beach was long and very dry The moon had argued it wanted to stay But try as it might, could not get its way The beach was dry and very long Two figures came walking along They wept as they went and quietly spoke Of cockle shell boats rowed by gentle folk With the sun high and tide so low They could see where the oysters grow The Walrus exclaimed I have a strong hunch That we have found a delicacy for lunch The beach was long and very dry Dining under the open sky The carpenter scraped butter on his bread While saying those oysters looked over fed The tide was low the sun was high Hear me oysters he did descry Come and join our party under the Sun Where you will have lots of wonderful fun The beach was dry and very long The oysters came singing a song La da dee we are happy as can be We will party then go back to the sea With the sun high and the tide so low One oyster cried please do not go But the other oysters were more sanguine For the carpenter offered them some wine The beach was long and very dry There seemed to be nothing awry The oysters sat and listened to tall tales Of dragons and knights and ships in full sail The tide was low the sun was high Alas the oysters end was nigh The Walrus said oysters do not decline The carpenter and I shall start to dine The beach was dry and very long No more was sung the happy song The walrus looked at the gentle sea swell The carpenter held the last empty shell Dedicated to my friends Mikki & The Queen of Ghali Makers of the most wonderful magic ~Completed 22/04/2015~

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Date: 2/10/2016 2:39:00 PM
Thank you Shane! I dropped by to visit some of you work, when I saw the title of this piece, I opened it first.:) Love the imagery and how you ended this!:) You truly are gifted.:) Perseverance pays off when intentions are good! Still Shane, will I always have problems with that stalker/predator/parasite from the Soup?:( Best wishes, love, Mikki
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Shane Cooper
Date: 2/11/2016 2:45:00 AM
My dear sweet friend Mikki, thank you for your kind words, you know that it was your wonderful poetry that inspired this poor attempt of mine. If i could i would tar and feather your problem and put it on the first rail out of town!! Your poetry in my humble opinion rocks and i would so love for you to write again. stay safe sweet lady. love Shane xxx
Date: 4/28/2015 11:00:00 PM
I loved this Shane. Your version is a classic in itself. Your repeating lines are woven in so well and make this creation even more of a delight to read. I have to say I thought yours was better than the original. You would do really well at interpreting poems written in other languages. It is a real art and you have the flair for it. I must fave this one!
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Shane Cooper
Date: 4/29/2015 8:08:00 PM
Dearest Connie, I am so appreciative of your lovely comments. I put a lot of effort into this work and nothing else i have written has taken so long to complete. I was trying to come up to the standard that my friend Michelle Mac Donald (Mikki) achieved with her fantasy writes. Thanks so much for the Fav. It makes me happy to know someone has found so much pleasure in what i have written. Love Shane xxx
Date: 4/23/2015 2:38:00 PM
I agree with both Wally and Jan! I love the repeated phrases and the tight rhyming words. It's adorably cute. Also....thanks for the dedication, dear. Hugs to you, Shane....
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Shane Cooper
Date: 4/24/2015 8:02:00 PM
My beautiful friend, thank you for your kind words. It took a long time to write and I appreciate your coments. Swim free little dolphin Love Shane xxx
Date: 4/22/2015 8:50:00 PM
I agree with Jan Shane. Delightful!
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Shane Cooper
Date: 4/22/2015 9:24:00 PM
Thanks Wally for the visit, I have not had a lot of time lately To write either poetry or just comment but i hope that will change soon. I appreciate your visit. love Shane
Date: 4/22/2015 4:49:00 PM
simply delightful Shane this would make a lovely children's book with its delightful imagery - a lovely tribute to your friends:-) Hugs jan xx 7 xx
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Date: 4/22/2015 5:12:00 PM
Thanks Jan, Wish it was an original idea rather than variations but I do so love the nursery rhymes. Thanks for the encouagement I have been having troubles getting any writing finished so this was a labour of love. Stay safe my dear friend love Shane xxx

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