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Oxymoronic

Marooned on an island where the sun never sets Where the sky's always tinged a certain hue We'll party along with all the other guests Our mood will be a brashly-subtle reddest blue We'll be free to run slowly through our waking sleep Pushing through that pleasurable pain Tell each other stories filled with honest lies And then tell them for the first time, once again We could sit around the fire eating jumbo shrimp We'll declare that they're disgustingly delicious Pretend they're awfully good when cooked under wet flames While admitting that they're pointlessly nutritious And our troubles would be few, growing smaller every day Though the deafening silence could be bitter sweet If we're found to be missing, our hope could soar like lead balloons As even-odds, they'll send a rescue fleet The open secret will always be, that we wanted to remain That our leaving there was filled with such sweet sorrow They'll be right and they'll be wrong, for we truly understand There are wise fools and ordered chaos each tomorrow

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 9/16/2016 1:17:00 PM
So good, David. Wish I could oxymoronisize (unofficial word) even half as well. :-)
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David Lindsay
Date: 9/16/2016 8:24:00 PM
Thanks Tom. I'm sure you have far more useful skills :)
Date: 9/16/2016 9:38:00 AM
David, Congratulations on your awesome win. Stop by my blog "SEIZE THE DAY." Celebrate with me. WUV **SKAT**
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David Lindsay
Date: 9/16/2016 8:23:00 PM
Thanks very much Skat, will do :)
Date: 8/29/2016 5:07:00 PM
Great job of linking in so many fine examples. Nice rhythm and flow also, liked this a lot.
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David Lindsay
Date: 9/2/2016 10:07:00 AM
Thanks :)
Date: 8/28/2016 9:52:00 AM
David, what are we supposed to use now that you've left us only with "Military Intelligence" ? Great write and example.!
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David Lindsay
Date: 9/2/2016 10:07:00 AM
Thanks. Ah yes, Military Intelligence. Another verse in that perhaps :)
Date: 8/19/2016 7:39:00 PM
So many oxymorons linked together here,David!Thanks for the lucid example!
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David Lindsay
Date: 8/23/2016 11:15:00 PM
Thanks very much :)
Date: 8/17/2016 5:55:00 PM
ha ha ha this is priceless David - a great example for the contest - you have set the bar very high with this poem:-) hugs Jan xx7
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David Lindsay
Date: 8/23/2016 11:14:00 PM
Thanks Jan. Enjoyed writing this one :)

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