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'owed' To 'God'

We suck. Honestly, for if tHere be Creator, we’ve made them out to be ‘haters’, baiters, facilitators of pain and punishment in judgment of our ‘sins’. If I were ‘Them’, I’d ***** slap us. What if… We really are created in the image of…then what? No wonder we struggle with guilt and sin because if we ARE in the image of Creator … can you imagine? Here’s the deal… there is Know Such a Thing Creator wouldn’t punish in judgment of anything Destroy such precious generations of life and that’s right… we’ve been ‘here’ a very Long Time for reason through countless seasons breathing surviving existing over Time. We grew. Learned yearned, cared to dare and Became. Aware, We invented debated, moved over lands and Pro.Created. Grew schools, organized rules in towns growing over grounds into cities of abundant sounds. Do we know exactly how ‘delicate’ we ARE in this Universe? How almost impossibly improbable our existence even is? You being here, now at this moment in this space of real time current reading this silly little rhyme is THE definition of Time. We Owe it to God, because the truth is? We’re pretty hard on ourSelves. All things considered.

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Date: 10/30/2009 9:37:00 AM
If we are in his image, we should all realize, we have the power of creation too, thought, must have come before creation, and everything in this world, is created from thought! we become what we think about,I believe our destiny is where our thoughts take us, must go, just going to create a cup of coffee! lol love Simone
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Date: 10/26/2009 3:00:00 PM
Love this one, Izzy ... Why? ... because it reeks of TRUTH ... at least from my point of view ... smile ... There might be a Spirit of the Universe that is our collective consciousness, but, there is for me NO GOD in any religious sense of that word. Thanks for bringing your talent and ideas to the Soup !!
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Date: 10/26/2009 1:40:00 PM
It's interesting you say that Sara... again, not having read the book, but if it's true that 'all things were created by God'... then I think 'Satan' IS the misunderstanding that perhaps has been 'mixed up' I always appreciate you reading and giving such open and thoughtful comments. :)
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Date: 10/26/2009 12:36:00 PM
Audrey, thanks for the comment, I'm not sure where most of this writing comes from...I've never read the bible nor attended 'church'. I do believe we don't love ourselves in as much abundance as it was ... 'written' to be all about... in the beginning. I just see this all as huge effort on Gods part (based on Genes 1 to ...where ever I am). I can only speak for myself and yes, I am pretty hard on mySelf at time. You?
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Date: 10/26/2009 12:30:00 PM
Izzy, Do you really believe, 'the truth is we're pretty hard on ourselves' or am I misunderstanding your write? Peace, Audrey
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Date: 10/26/2009 12:16:00 PM
God loves us but the question is do we love him. Satan is the author of all sickness, sin,etc. Every good and perfect gift is from above. We as people get it mixed up sometimes. Keep writing. Sara
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