Owd Fart

You linger just like a foul smell ... I've come to accept you're just an old fart! 5/17/19

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Jack Horne

Date: 5/27/2019 2:33:00 PM

ROFL, LOVE this

Warren Doll

Date: 5/19/2019 9:13:00 AM

Jan, you made me laugh out loud with this gem. So funny. All the best~ Wattrn

Maurice Rigoler

Date: 5/19/2019 7:51:00 AM

Haha! Old farts are the worse kind, Jan, which is why I expel mine ASAP before they can do real damage. Thanks for stopping by. / M

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/18/2019 12:47:00 PM

haha, GREAT poem, Jan.

Ralph Sergi

Date: 5/18/2019 7:50:00 AM

I love the essence your poem, Jan. and the way you evoke humor. Keep smiling and make us laugh!

Jan Allison
Date: 5/18/2019 7:58:00 AM

Thanks Ralph I has fun with this one, glad it made you smile:-) hugs Jan xx

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 5/18/2019 6:08:00 AM

old watered down fart lol, you tickled me silly. Life is so serious what would we do without your sense of humor, stay on it Jan, and have a great day xo

Jan Allison
Date: 5/18/2019 7:54:00 AM

Thanks Pixie my serious muse is finally being eclipsed by humour, being in the cancer hospital with hubby for a week was a humbling experience, he still has another 4 1/2 weeks to go but is doing well:-) hugs Jan xx