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Overstayed My Welcome

Nearing the end here, don't think it'll be long My time is short may have sung my last song Met some very sweet peeps Love you guys heaps Overstayed my welcome soon be moseying on

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Date: 6/8/2016 11:11:00 AM
What!!! I'm feeling friskie again... and you're moving on? Bummer... Think I'll send Dragon and his Menagerie up North to perk your cute little butt up!... Ops... Did I say that?.. Heaven forbide I'm using the B word... LOL
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Jack Ellison
Date: 6/9/2016 7:24:00 AM
As I told Laura, just slowing down! Really... I think my butt needs perking! LOL xx
Date: 6/5/2016 6:57:00 PM
Jack, I am always enjoying your awesome work. You write resiliently and lovingly my friend. <3 <3 Lots of love always, Laura
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Jack Ellison
Date: 6/6/2016 9:04:00 AM
Not leaving... just slowing down a bit! Love to you my cherished friend!!! xxx
Date: 6/5/2016 9:35:00 AM
aww Jack we all have good and bad days but your cheery verses make many smile:-) hugs Jan xx
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Jack Ellison
Date: 6/6/2016 8:44:00 AM
Fear not... just gonna slow down for a but!!! Love Bro xxx
Date: 6/5/2016 9:08:00 AM
I am feeling the same way too...all the smiled have turned to blue...most driven away...can we really stay.... last of a breed whose words ring true
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Jack Ellison
Date: 6/6/2016 8:43:00 AM
Hey Tim... guess it's too much of a good thing eh!!! Maybe I'll just slow down instead of "moseying on"!
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Jan Allison
Date: 6/5/2016 9:34:00 AM
Think we are all feeling pretty sad, my poems have turned out really bad, but Tim nice but dim, you make me grin I reckon you're a bit of a lad:-) :-) hugs Jan xx

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