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Overloading

Your mind cannot be replaced Keep it at a steady pace Blinkers on to keep it strong You cannot control what’s going on You’re here and now is yours to know Thoughts and action’s moment control Feelings of peace Feelings of love All other feelings give them a shove

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Sunlite Wanter

Date: 9/12/2017 5:23:00 PM

So upbeat - right you can't control "it," only yourself.

Niall Fulham
Date: 9/13/2017 1:25:00 AM

Hi Sunlite , today is a beautiful day , thank you for your comment my friend :::)))))) hugs

Niall Fulham
Date: 9/13/2017 1:22:00 AM

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 9/11/2017 4:26:00 PM

nicely painted niall thought i would check out a fellow country man's pen smiling

Niall Fulham
Date: 9/11/2017 6:07:00 PM

Hi Liam , thank you for your comment , I have read some of your writes and I find myself looking up , your level is on stage just simple wonderful. ::))

Patricia Cresswell

Date: 9/10/2017 8:56:00 AM

Yep, kick them to the curb.

Niall Fulham
Date: 9/10/2017 9:17:00 AM

Hi Patricia , glad you enjoyed my friend :))) hugs

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/10/2017 6:52:00 AM

- A lovely poem, Niall - Have a nice Sunday :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Niall Fulham
Date: 9/10/2017 9:16:00 AM

Hi Anne-Lise , thank you Sunshine you too have a lovely Sunday my friend ::))) hugs , peace and love :)

Darren White

Date: 9/10/2017 2:15:00 AM

Great inspirational poem, Niall :)

Niall Fulham
Date: 9/10/2017 2:20:00 AM

Hi Darren , thank you for comment my friend , have a lovely day::)))))

Carole Duet

Date: 9/9/2017 8:02:00 PM

Very nice! I like it a lot. :) And, it was good advice.

Niall Fulham
Date: 9/10/2017 1:55:00 AM

Hi Carole , thank you for comment , glad you enjoyed my friend ::)) hugs

Susan Ashley

Date: 9/9/2017 6:50:00 PM

I love your poem Niall! It's fantastic with wonderful rhyme and content. I think your last three lines should be printed on t-shirts world-wide - so the human race can get a clue! A great write my friend! :)

Susan Ashley
Date: 9/9/2017 7:01:00 PM

Lol! Of course I would pay you a royalty, that would only be fair after all! You are such a sweet person my friend. Warmest regards always!

Niall Fulham
Date: 9/9/2017 6:53:00 PM

Hi Susan , You have my full permission to print and if you make a few million I will be happy for you my friend ,, thank you for comment ::))) hugs , peace and love;)

Carol B.

Date: 9/9/2017 5:49:00 PM

Great message and rhyme. I liked it a lot. :)

Niall Fulham
Date: 9/9/2017 6:50:00 PM

Hi Carol , thank you my friend ::))) hugs