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The overlapping of me and us three Of who I was and who I turned out to be I never ever felt I was good enough Or tuff enough to deal with that stuff Gentleness inside grew like a flower by day by night hour by hour Yet I’m not some shrinking violet I did not could not would not cower I allowed soft to become my superpower No bitter bone or heart like stone A soft voice without the sappy happy tone Those who need me won’t be left all alone My minds not made to be judgmental even when others might feel anger prone So I’m okay with me and who you two became too We each have our ways to be true I’m thankful we escaped our blue Finding our best way through We are more than what we were or even all the things we’ve done or do Nothing is everything Thankfully overlapping old ways make way for the new. Myself an my siblings each dealt with the trauma of our childhood in our own ways. When I was younger I had trouble accepting their different ways. Time is a lense that helps us view the past with more clarity.

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Date: 2/8/2022 4:33:00 AM
Grateful for the clarity that time brings. We get older and (hopefully) wiser. Lovely piece Richard.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/18/2022 7:15:00 AM
Yes that is the hope. Thanks for reading and for your thoughtful response.
Date: 8/14/2021 9:43:00 PM
Richard, Very nice vines in this one. -Richard
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/18/2022 7:16:00 AM
Thanks for reading.
Date: 8/14/2021 9:22:00 AM
Time pours into our world its weight and wisdom.. souls who cross our paths of Life and mark our hearts and minds in so many different ways.. along with hidden gifts and blessings.. I see it as a so beautiful and enriching interdependency.. the deeper we become aware the least we are judgemental.. You have displayed life concerns wonderfully into a so expressive poetry! Truly a great pleasure to read a poetry that opens many a window into the soul!: thank you so much, Richard for sharing! My deepest regards and blessings.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/18/2022 7:17:00 AM
Thanks for your poignant response. Always a pleasure to have you visit.
Date: 8/13/2021 8:21:00 AM
Richard, Heartfelt beautiful raw emotion realizing your transition through life and the knowledge of what lies beneath. I love this and your wisdom and self acceptance. Faving this to read again ! Love, Susan :)
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/13/2021 3:22:00 PM
How sweet. Hugs Rick.
Date: 8/9/2021 2:18:00 AM
Powerful write. We all develop different coping mechanisms. The key is survival. I'm glad you found your way into the light.
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Date: 8/13/2021 3:21:00 PM
That is true, some are more healthy than others. Hugs Rick.
Date: 8/8/2021 6:06:00 PM
A fine write, Richard. I truly believe introspection can improve us almost on a daily basis. Sometimes it's meditation; other times it is just a clear-eyed look at what we are doing and saying. I loved your poem, friend. Nice!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/13/2021 3:21:00 PM
Well said. ;0)
Date: 8/6/2021 3:31:00 AM
Loved reading your narrative Richard... With time everything changes including our insights on life... so well penned... Have a blessed day.. ~ Ani
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/7/2021 11:30:00 AM
You as well Anitha. Hugs Rick
Date: 8/3/2021 4:17:00 PM
WoW! Richard, Although me and my siblings grew up in the home, my childhood was much different. I often wondered why me? I resented it too. But as I grew older, I feel differently. Thanks for sharing such a write:-) Alexis
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/5/2021 4:23:00 AM
Thanks for your visit and kind comment Alexis.
Date: 8/2/2021 9:13:00 PM
A wonderful poem you've shared Richard. I agree with you that we see things more clearly as we age. Saved in my favorites to read again. Hope you have a great week. :)
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Date: 8/5/2021 4:22:00 AM
Thanks so much Angela. Hugs Rick.
Date: 8/1/2021 10:44:00 AM
Hi Richard, Maturity is a space we reach having gone through experiences in our lives, when are we mature, as early as from our teens, sometimes we have had to take on responsibility from a young age, but when we reach pensionable age, when is that by the way, we still have our business and God willing, hope to be able to carry on until we can't any more, emotions are easier to handle, age becomes a stabilizer for mortality does come into play. Great write Ricky, Hugs, blessings, Jennifer.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/2/2021 5:52:00 AM
Thanks for the blessings and hugs. ;0)
Date: 7/29/2021 2:06:00 AM
When we grow older, we view the same things with a different perspective coated with experience, great that you accept them as they are now, Richard:)
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/29/2021 6:18:00 AM
Thanks Jo.;0)
Date: 7/28/2021 8:27:00 PM
People deal with trauma in different ways. It is hard enough to deal with your own feelings when you are young. Your poem was the result of a lot of soul searching. Excepting people as they are with no bitter feelings of the past.... Wise words, heartfelt poem. Take care ... Shirley
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/28/2021 10:49:00 PM
What a thoughtful comment. I appreciate your visit. ;0)
Date: 7/27/2021 9:28:00 PM
Very well expressed. Growing older has some benefits I also have found -- acceptance of self and others, our differences, can be a big plus.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/28/2021 3:29:00 PM
I agree Joe.
Date: 7/27/2021 7:56:00 AM
Such beauty there is in gentle love and acceptance. Yours words are sweetly penned with a powerful message. I love this !!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/28/2021 3:27:00 PM
Thanks Mike.;0)
Date: 7/26/2021 5:43:00 PM
What a beautiful heartfelt poem. I really enjoyed reading this Richard. :-) Cheers Anne
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/27/2021 6:07:00 AM
Thanks, hugs Rick.
Date: 7/26/2021 2:22:00 PM
Your poetry, reminds me of a soul searching map, a journey one has to experience so to make choices as one grows older, such richness. I've been guided many times by your poetry, my friend.
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Date: 7/27/2021 6:07:00 AM
You’re words and comments have been a great encouragement over the time I have been here.
Date: 7/25/2021 2:45:00 AM
Soul-stirring poetry, Richard. Acceptance is the bond of self-awareness. Thanks for giving us insight into this profound poem, my dear friend. Love and more love always.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/25/2021 1:44:00 PM
Thanks Freddie. ;0)
Date: 7/24/2021 8:25:00 PM
Beautifully woven, Richard. To me, the underlying (great) significance here is that your relationship continues, despite the blue beginning and all the twists and turns. May you all continue to appreciate each other. Thanks for sharing this. Happiness Forever, Gershon
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/25/2021 1:44:00 PM
Thanks so much, blessings to you too.
Date: 7/24/2021 1:10:00 PM
Getting older brings wisdom and memories of the past certainly look a lot clearer. Hope your weekend is going well Richard. Tom
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/24/2021 2:40:00 PM
Hi Tom, it’s a beautiful weekend here. Heading off for a swim.
Date: 7/24/2021 11:29:00 AM
As we grow older we begin to see the role we played at home as we were growing up. We all played our part and some of us, survived by different means, Its nice when we are old to realize we made it through and the best part is when we realize, we turned out more then jus ok, lovely write that goes straight for the heart, Thank you Richard.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/24/2021 2:41:00 PM
Thanks for the thoughtful response. Hugs Rick.
Date: 7/24/2021 9:08:00 AM
wow, this is amazing and heartfelt. A fave for me!!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/24/2021 11:16:00 AM
Thanks Andrea. ;0)

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